chapter 209
Megamiea:
finished! + maybe a bit of edit, enjoy! I changed some imagery
to make it easier to understand in english ^-^
Guy and Chloe were on the third day of
their non-stop duel. Although neither were serious, they occasionally
did mix in a couple of lethal attacks. Both parties were analyzing
the capabilities of each other.
“Die, Illusory Claws of Doom(災厄の魔幻爪)
– Calamity Claw!!”
“How naive.”
Chloe stops Guy's claws with her spirit
sword. Her armaments of the holy spirit had evolved to that of
mythical grade God class items. Therefore it can withstand the claws
of the strongest Demon King, Guy, without being shattered. Moreover,
the sword was durable enough to be strumming against his claws like
strings of a violin. Chloe counter-attacks from that position. But
her body loses it's strength,
“Guhff!!”
She coughs out blood, and blood flows
out from her eyes and nose. Her Absolute Defense should have blocked
and deflected that attack. Or so it appeared. An attack invisible to
the eyes, targeting her life-
“Die, Calamity Claw!!”
With a blank expression, Chloe dodged
his flashy attacks by a distance that was more than an overkill. And
as if nothing had occurred, she points her sword towards Guy in a
stance. Her face that should have been stained with blood from her
orifices, but instead she carried an innocent smile on her face as if
nothing had happened at all. Mysterious, almost as if Guy's attack
from earlier had ever occurred-
“Ah hahahahaaha! Amazing! No wonder
you're a hero eh? It's scary how you're able to dodge that last
attack, man.”
“...Thanks.”
“If you tried to stop it, you would
have died, dude.”
Chloe responds to Guy's honest praise
with only one word. She doesn't respond to the provocation that
followed since she knew... that it was the truth; hence her mind is
in disarray. Guy's unique ability, Calamity Claw, was an extremely
potent poison-class skill. Rather than being venomous, it spread the
worst kind of infectious disease that targets the nerve cells that
spread from the initial point of contact. In fact, she had already
died from this skill once. Although Absolute Defence automatically
nullifies direct damage, it does not nullify the secondary effects
of the deadly pore particles of the infectious virus that seeps
through her sword's point of contact. By defending the strike of the
claws, the virus had scattered from the clash of their weapons, and
consequently the infected Chloe had died. However, with her Ultimate
skill “Time-Space King” Yogg Sorhtorts, she had experienced the
future in where she had already died, and with her retained memory of
the future she had successfully dodged his attacks. *kind of like
butterfly effect dejavu I think*
After experiencing the future, Chloe
would return to the past. In other words, she retains the memories
from the future. To all others, it would appear that she had luckily
decided to dodge the attack rather then block it, but such an
appearance is a mere illusion. Rather than by luck, she had
deliberately chosen the best course of defence each time.
Even though with the ability to
recognize the future to dodge Guy's attacks completely, she didn't
have the upper hand in this battle by all means. For unlike the fight
against the most powerful entity known as Veldora, Guy's each and
every single attack was deliberate and clearly dangerous. Overall,
she gets a vibe that he isn't serious at all, but he mixes in
dangerous attacks randomly so there is no breathing room for her.
Like a master trapsman, Guy strategically plans his attacks as if
steadily leading Chloe into his traps. Even if she were to die, it
was clear that he had only used attacks that would allow
resurrections. He was likely planning to release Chloe from her curse
after killing her to have Rimuru indebted to him. Yet, she knows such
a ruse is futile. For she had seen the future whence she had died,
where Guy had muttered “I've failed” when he tried to dispel her
curse. It was clear that the curse Yuuki had placed on her would not
be so easily removed. Because of this, Chloe kept on following the
ordered placed upon her – to stop Guy from interfering. And Guy's
powers knew no bounds; all of Chloe's attacks were completely figured
out by him. While it is true that neither side were completely
serious, Chloe had already died three times. Though his attacks
weren't impossible to avoid, it felt as though each attack was
deliberate and would masterfully lead Chloe's movements to result in
her death. Like a marionette, dancing on the palm of his hands, no
matter what she did most likely the whole situation was under his
complete control.
One of the deaths were due to
carelessness. Despite stopping the time with her ability to dodge his
attack, she had still been hit and her heart was pierced. Therefore,
Guy could probably move while the time is paused. Thus, after
remembering this result, she had stopped using her time-stop ability;
for it would only serve to reveal more of her abilities to her
opponent. All the while Guy never did use time-stop to initiate his
attacks however. If he had done that, he would see that Chloe could
move while time is paused, and consequently discover that she would
be a time-space ability user. No, Guy wouldn't be the type to deliver
such a simple attack; that was the main difference between Veldora
and Guy; Guy had absolute confidence in his abilities, yet he never
struck Chloe with complete dependence on his abilities alone. She was
a little embarrassed by this; because she should have had a back-up
plan prepared in case her unique ability was negated, and thus she
took this lesson to her heart. This should have been basics after
such a long journey along with everything that she's gone through.
Regrettably, she's gotten too strong, and she had become too careless
overtime without realizing it. But now, turning over a new leaf, she
faces Guy once more.
The situation would be completely
different had they both been serious. For Guy wouldn't be toying
around with her, and Chloe was certain she would defeat Guy with her
Absolute Sword Strike without holding back. However, it was clear
that Guy would be victorious if it was a battle of only physical
attacks. Because the power of the Ultimate Skill, “Time- Space
King Yog Sohorts”, was absolute; therefore she had relied upon her
Ultimate too much. Chloe decided to go back to basic and to face Guy
with fresh start.
**Yeah these couple of paragraphs are a
bit repetitive and its confusing but I tried my best to convey the
story as close to the original words as possible. In short, I think
it means that if Chloe had went all out from the start, and used all
her skills with full power, she would have won the fight due to the
unfair nature of her abilities. While Guy on the other hand is genius
(in regards to fighting), and a more experienced fighter, since he's
lived so long. Because the fight's gotten drawn out, he's analyzing
her talents more effectively, therefore he's coming out ahead...
something like that okie ^-^**
Guy narrows his eyes in astonishment.
For he hadn't faced a foe this difficult since “Ice Dragon”
Velzard. He was certain that he had grown stronger considerably –
but he felt that perhaps that belief was much too naive. From Guy's
eyes, Chloe's movements did not follow his plan as intended: Attacks
that should have killed her hit naught but air, and fake faints that
were lethal were all seen through.
He's truly impressed. Neither side are
serious, but if they were, would he really be able to win? Honestly,
he wasn't sure if he could truly answer that question. Well, there
was only one way to find out. Hence, “True Hero” Chloe O'bell was
an existence equal to Guy Crimson.
(Strong, huh!)
Guy sneers gleefully. Initially he
believed it'd be excellent to dispel Chloe's curse and have Rimuru
owe him one, but now... She was far stronger than he had thought. Was
he no longer the strongest? No way! That's how he felt. Versus the
Chloe who was a super first-class swordsman, Guy was bare handed.
Thinking it'd be rude to his opponent, Guy draws his sword.
*I
changed a lot more than usual for last paragraph to make it easier to
read, maybe its better?*
“You should be real proud. To
actually have me draw my sword.”
Guy professed to Chloe, after swiftly
taking out a sword out of the thin air. His Demonic Sword “Earth”
had been passed down to Mirim. In it's place he had prepared another
sword; it was Demonic Sword “World.” Also called the Starheart,
it was forged with the toughest material – the strongest sword.
Unlike Mirim's sword, it was well maintained and emitted a rainbow
coloured glow. Then he restrained the power that was overflowing from
the sword and pointed it towards Chloe in and readied in stance.
Innocently, he wanted to enjoy a sword-fight with her. While fighting
against Rudra or Velzard, victory was certain. However when facing
the strongest hero, Chloe, the outcome was uncertain. And that, is
what it means to be an equal. Although Guy considers Leon and Velzard
his friends, he knew that their abilities were not on par with his.
And that's why he's happy.
(You're way better than what I expected
“Hero” Chloe!!)
Facing Chloe- Guy hadn't been this
nervous since the time he had fought “Star Dragon King”
Veldnarva.
There was someone watching the duel
between the two; it was “Ice Dragon” Velzard. She carries a
gleeful smile while watching Guy. Like a hurricane, there was an
intense fire that roaring in her heart. Anger? No, it was something
else; it was jealousy. Ever since his elder brother Veldnarva had
acknowledged Guy, Velzard had been jealous. She had bred those
feelings, carefully concealed from Guy. What had recurred in her mind
was the contents of a message she had received several day prior.
Previously, she had received a thought transmission, an ability
unique to Dragonkind, from her supposedly deceased brother,
Veldnarva, which had startled her greatly.
--Annihilate Guy in my place--
She takes a deep sigh after recalling
the message. She was familiar about the disputes regarding Yuuki, and
the tasks that Rimuru had asked of Guy. To discover that the identity
behind the villain that resided within Yuuki, Anra Manyu, was
Veldnarva, all along... it really troubled her. Should she be
troubled by it? In the first place she had gotten closer to Guy to
keep an eye on him. However, perhaps just by a teeny bit, she had
enjoyed the time she spent with Guy way too much : Guy was arrogant,
Guy was stupid, Guy was kind, Guy was ruthless, Guy was terrifying,
and finally Guy was the only one that her brother acknowledged as a
friend. She had grown fond of spending time with fifty shades of Guy.
But, if brother says to kill Guy then I
– besides, Guy has never shown that kind of face to me. For him to
appear so elated in the heat of battle...
While fighting Velzard, Guy was
treating her like a gentle flower, deliberating each of his attack
with much consideration as to not hurt her. **original text says he
treated her like a kid as an adult does, doing his best to not hurt
her** Was that when it started? When roots of jealous had began to
entangle her heart of Guy Crimson, the Demon King, whom her brother
had personally acknowledged. Then-
(Guy is really kind to me. But he never
allows me to stand beside him.)
--That is because you are weak.--
(I am strong. I am among the strongest
Dragon kind.)
--Nope, you are weak. Actually, do you
even have the right to stand beside to him?--
(That's-)
--You want power? If you had power, Guy
would let you stand beside him.--
(But that's not my wish...)
--Is that really true? You are
invisible to him, because you are weak.--
(If I had strength, if I was much more
powerful, would that make Guy see me?”
--Ofcourse. Not only that, it would
certainly make your wishes come true.--
(Ahh... Strength, I desire more
strength.)
After hearing those words, she sensed a
hint of malicious intent quietly smirking behind it.
--Let's release that jealousy.--
That phrase echoes across Velzard's
mind. It was a phrase that was engraved within her heart, placed by
Veldnarva to release overwhelming powers of jealousy.
--Kill Guy and release the pain in your
heart.--
**original: Kill Guy and do as you
please**
Her elder brother had given the
permission, to release her true potential and gains new powers.
Immediately, Ice Dragon Velzard's heart
was captured by Velda with her sense of reasoning blown away.
Although rampaging mindlessly, she was the strongest among dragons,
second only to Veldnarva. Then a colossal amount of magical energy
wave rampaged across and swept over the land. Carelessly Hilary
stepped in front of Velzard trying to stop her; despite her efforts,
it resulted in her body being bisected into upper and lower halves.
With unimaginable power, an overwhelming amount of energy was being
controlled by Velzard. Suddenly-
She awakened. A manifestation true to
her desires, she became the Goddess of Jealousy. To kill Guy, and
fulfill her desire, to keep Guys hers and hers only. Unleashing her
true potential she gained new Ultimate skills: “Endurance King”
Gabriel and Envy King Leviathan
(I will kill Guy!!)
Blindly she proceeds, unable to see
naught but that single desire.
Instinctively, Chloe and Guy had
simultaneously escaped from the battleground. For a ludicrously
intense waves of absolute cold pierced the very ground they stood on,
freezing the very movements of the molecules to a halt.
“velzard – you... I see, I forgot
yo. You carried that jealousy with you the whole time huh-”
Velzard laughs gently at his grumble.
“Guy, I've always – for as long as,
I -”
And the whole world comes to a halt. A
segregated place in space-time, a place where all time had come to an
absolute stop, “Absolute Stop world”. By the will of its ruler,
all laws of physics stopped functioning.
- In exception to those who were left
behind here.
Chloe, Guy and Velzard. These three
confirmed their respective presences. Even the flow of time was
stopped in this world. However, neither Chloe, nor Guy had any
problems moving about. The problem was-
For Chloe, there were now two
opponents. And the chance to victory was close to nil. Unlike Chloe,
Velzard's energy felt bottomless while using the time-stop ability;
the amount of energy was reminiscent of the feeling when she faced
Rimuru. Therefore Velzard was most likely be able to pause time for a
long duration. While Chloe could move in this state, it appears that
her ability of foresight was sealed. Truly, it hurt her odds to have
her strongest trump card ability sealed. Therefore, it was imperative
for her to survive for the duration of the time-stop until it was
released. Furthermore there was no longer any leeway to hold anything
back. While Guy isn't her absolute enemy, neither is he her ally.
Moreover she was unable to move freely under Yuuki's curse. Truly the
worst possible situation. Thus she resolved to face them with full
prudence.
Guy was slightly awestruck and did his
best to comprehend the situation. I see, no wonder it took so long
for her to get jealous. And immediately -
(This is bad yo, I was going to play
around because Rimuru asked me to bailed him out but...)
He ponders to himself.
Chloe's under control via Velda's
curse. Although seemingly she resists majority of its effects,
admittedly she isn't able to act on her free will. Therefore,
regrettably they aren't able to establish a relationship for
temporary alliance. Meanwhile, Velzard was -
(Tsk, she's completely lost it.)
With deftness that show almost no signs
of being manipulated, she moves. Guy recognizes the fury that gushes
from the inner depths of his heart. He can't remember the last time
he felt this way.
(Un-freakin-forgivable. You dare lay
hand on what's mine! Brainwashing my cute little Velzard, you've got
some real guts Velda!! You sayin' you want to die that badly, I'll
kill ya.)
With relentless rage stinging the air,
Guy's pure crimson hairs spikes up. While facing Chloe, doing his
best to not kill him – well, it's fine to kill her up to a
revive-able degree – he'll face Velzard. Simultaneously, protecting
Chloe from Velzard's attacks while returning Velzard's sanity.
(Even for the great ol' me, this is
stupid hard-)
While
clicking his tongue only in his mind, Guy had determined his resolve.
Avowedly, in this instant, he also resolved to kill Velda. Likewise
Guy confirmed his feelings that Velda ≠
Veldnarva in this exact moment.
(That guy wouldn't do somethin'
cowardly like this. 'Cuz I know destroying this world by himself
would be a piece of cake if he was serious.)
Those were Guy's true feelings. That is
why, with no trace of hesitation, he had severed his feelings
towards Velda. For... Veldnarva was gone. And with eyes brimming with
absolute focus, he turns his line of sight to the two of them.
The situation is close to a three-way
deadlock. Even so, Velzard has the most upper hand, for she lacks
worry, and is able to act without hesitation. Forthwith, the battle
in the Stopped World commences.
Thanks a lot for continuing to translate it little by little in your free time. I assure you it's greatly appreciated even if most people who read it don't actually comment anything.
ReplyDeleteThanks I appreciate it.
DeleteTranks!!!
ReplyDeleteI love your translation. Keep it up. Thank you for the chap.
ReplyDeletethanks for the chapter!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the chapter.
ReplyDeleteETA of complate 209?
Not sure really. I'm finished with 8-9 pages and am on the last page. This chapter had a lot of butterfly effects regarding time-space and I had to revise had I wrote many times or It wouldn't make any sense at all. Please be patient, had some personal stuff over the weekend until today so I couldn't translate very much. On a free day if I'm really motivated I can probably do 2 chapters, but that's if I forsake any grammar or anything else but I don't think it'll be very legible or fun to read for anyone (Chapter 208 took 2 days but it was way easier to understand and I was free). Oh and if anyone has contacts with a translator or editor it would help speed things by an order of magnitude, I tried emailing guro to colab him but never got a reply so I guess they have enough translator/editors. Ultimately, I'm going to focus on quality over quantity, because this is such an awesome story so I want to replicate the author's words as much as possible and while hopefully to improve upon it if I can, but if everyone prefers faster chaps, I will try to find a better middle ground though ^-^
Deletefinished!
Deleteawesome mega
DeleteAwesome work
ReplyDeletethanks you. hope this series will end before 2018.
ReplyDeletea message to megamiea, can ya get onto the LNA discord(the link should still be on lion mask's old site somewhere... and coz dat's where i'm active)? there seems to be a need to discuss certain things....
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hey sushi, I couldn't the link. Is it somewhere here https://lionmaskrpt.wordpress.com/faq/ ?
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Deletethere's no way Sushi is the idiot who always use caps comment like those cliche self attention seeker.
oh i just didnt bother to make a name, i dont comment at guro's site
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DeleteKeep it up mate. Yours bring life to this series.
ReplyDeleteUnique ability = Unique skill (from guro and circus translation).
ReplyDeleteAnd is it just me since I think for some reason guy always refer chloe as him not her.
Oh and could you change that ≠ to isn't since for some reason it kinda irritate me, I wonder why ?
And the way guy's talk and intonation change kinda make me felt nausea but well whatever
As always thank you for your translation really appreciate your effort.
I'm sorry that my version of the translation irritates and nauseates you. I used the "≠" because it was used in the original, and I'm pretty sure anyone can understand it, just as you've used "Unique ability = Unique skill," it's an universal sign right? My motto is to keep it as close as to the original if possible when people can understand it. As I've stated before I couldn't get in touch with other translators, they just seem busy or something. It'd be easier to follow their pattern of translations if I have their unedited versions to keep some things more consistent. But I don't. I've carelessly read 200-some chapters of this series and I can't recall every writing nuances without going back to check on several chapters each time. I did that at the beginning and which took ages and I'm sure some people are like me, and want to read the next chapter ASAP so I hope I hit the target that makes everyone happy.
DeleteRegarding issue about Guy referring Chloe as him, in addition to the way Guy talks: Guy talks in a way like that in Japanese, using "ore" instead of I, and uses a surfer/punk type of speech mannerisms and there is no way to convey that in English, the tone he speaks in and what not - yes it is possible to convey that "feeling" of his character without changing the actual texts, however it would require visual or vocal indicator of that - so yes his mannerisms may be "irritating" and "nauseating" and the original texts did convey a similar although not as a severe feeling to me - I feel that I did a good job to convey that exact feeling to you, moreover Guy's persona in my opinion is the epitome of some type of people you might know in your life; he's the kind of person who would call me "dude" or "bro" even if I'm a girl - I'm sure you know how people like that. Guy's persona is that kind of guys you love to hate, but he comes through when the time is dire, like the typical anti-hero.
Moreover I think you've seen in this chapter how Velzard acted right? I haven't read the subsequent chapters but I'm sure you can tell that there's sparks of love desperately trying to light up between her and Guy. They've probably known each other for a millennia or something longer; and it definitely reinforces your idea regarding Guy having "irritating" personality. Because I'm sure Velzard hated his personality at the beginning too, but she slowly grew fond of him, but the two are never granted an opportunity to romance, and rightfully so especially when Guy treats her like a "dude." Guy probably loves her too, but he has that image he has to keep up. So yeah, they'll probably be lovey-dovey in a few chaps, likewise I hope you can grow to love my iteration of Guy, just as Velzard did.
my point is not all people are fluent with english and could understand the conversation but well technically you're not wrong thought.
Deletejust recheck the Raw and yeah indeed ≠ is use my bad Lol.
and Millim's sword is Evil God also known as Tenma not Earth, well while earth is the katakana version but please use the hiragana version since Guro and Circus use Tenma not Earth thought but yeah technically you're not wrong thought.
and it already confirmed in Light Novel that it's "Millim" not Milim neither Mirim (well if you use the so called japanese spelling its true that her name could be read as Mirim but well whatever)
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sorry if i nag a lot since i just hope the specific term to be keep consistent with the previous translated chapter.
The thing is... I think less people would understand tenma than just Demonic sword... I give up I really don't know what's up with this hate... I've explained why I didn't keep up the consistencies... And from I've read none of the three translators: Guro, Clown, Lion Mask, have kept absolutely everything in their version of translations... I'm going to just translate it for myself... I've actually checked the sword is 魔剣"世界 Literally translates to Demonic Sword: Earth. "Ma-ken" (demonic/magic-sword) "sekai" (World/Earth) Please it's very very hurtful just to criticize someone when you don't even fully check the facts, where is the tenma for the sword...?
DeleteGURO AND CLOWN BETTER U TRANSLATION SUCK Y U TRYHARD SO TO EXPALIN ANAD CRY 2 PAGE U CAN TRANSLATEFASTER IF U TRANSLATE NO CRY PLS FASTER TRANSLATE
ReplyDeleteI am done. Please stick to Guro.
DeleteI AM JOKE I LOVE U TRANSLATE NO STOP FASTER PLS
DeleteLol, look, he's dead.
DeleteJust keep doing mega san. We support you.
ReplyDeleteFor the one who blame mega san, you can consider this as unedited version, then go to guro san for good edited version.
Hope mega san and guro san and sushi san can make a good translator team.
Btw, can i know the ETA of 210?
Thank you.
I wish i knew Kanji so I can translate but... Anyway, if there's anything ppl can help out with, I would gladly help! Buuut I also have busy schedules so idk i just want to help 😅
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